Alice in WOnderland twisted story chapter one

Bored as hell, so i decided to give guys a preview of my next comic. It's pretty twisted..lol XD
And... Im very sorry about my bad grammar.
well here it goes..

Once a Upon a time.. well you know how it goes. This story takes place in our time, but somehow time has reached it's limit bringing 2 worlds together... again. Last time was the OOmpa Loompa Planet, as in Willy Wonka's planet and the Red Planet.. as in Wonderland Planet. When the 2 worlds collided, the Red Queen tried to take over the world, and now the Earth and the Red planet has collided. Now the Queen is going to take over that worl. she never gives up. so.. Willy Wonka has to find Alice.. to bring peace to the planets and the rest of the universe by defeating the Red Queen and restore time to its rightful place.


At the Oompa Loompa planet: The Oompa Loompa people are in a quite a bit of a panic because time has made two planets collided again.

Willy Wonka: (plugging his ears because of the red siren) This is bad, very bad...

Mr.. Oompa Loompa assistance (screaming), I know, it's terrible , Our cybertronic computer is telling us there is a disaster.  

Willy Wonka: (turns to his oompa loompa assistance), This is a disaster..!!

Oompa Loompa assistance says What are we gonna do? How are we gonna tell the Eath people there is going to be danger coming??

Willy Wonka (Smiles at his assistance and says).. I have a solution, bring me Charlie.. puh puh plll

Oompa Loompa (corrects Wonka) Please.....

Willy Wonka: Right... We won't tell the Earth planet , and there will be Alice and her trusty warriors to defend this planet. We're not here to stand like Monkeys, we'll be watching the fight and help them, because humans buy my chocolate..hahaha..  

Charlie; (Comes into the room) Wonka, what can i do for u? ( and so.. Mr. Wonka tells the plan to Charlie).


End of Ch. 1