I went to the Writers Club in the past two weeks, because I thought I could learn from them , by improving my Grammar. So last Tuesday! When I decided to share the story about Peter Pan that is on deviant art here, there critiques were, it need s to be more written when Tink left Neverland. The grammar wasn't the problem, and the writing is very distinctive and unique, and they want to hear more of it, because I left them hanging! The 2nd Star to the Right I said in the story was from the book Peter Pan, and why I wrote that story Peter Pan, and it was because I was into Peter Pan more one Summer, and decided to do the story.
In the Writers club, we were given the sentence, or a photo each time. so when they show it to us, we have 10 minutes to come up of a poem, a sentence, a word, a story, that connects with it. and last Tuesday we got .. it slipped... I could'nt think of any, so I wrote and decided to do what I did last Saturday and how I slipped that day, and this is what I got. V
What Slipped?? I have no clue who actually would Slip and Fall. but THE WHO I may know of!IT COULD VE BEEN ME! I Think IT was me last Saturday. It all happened on a lovely warm day....turned out abit cold at night.
Decided to go to my bank.. and my Dad was saying "Why Would your spend money on your friends Birthday?" I said "Yes I would spend money for my friend's Birthday, Because it will make his Birthday..." so my Dad just give me a look and shakes his head. Then my dog starts to whine to me, so I followed her what she wanted. So she went to the door... and I noticed what she wanted..
A Walk! Not just any other walk for her or me! I walk her when its nice out! So I started to think if i could bring her, and if i can bring her inside a bank. So my dad said just take her to your bank, its not open and their is no one inside, so I decided I should go do that. so I said to the dog Lets Go for a Walk! So that's what we did! :3
While going out of the house onto my driveway... there was water going down my driveway at night, so I think nothing of it... so the first step I took I slipped and fell right onto my Back! Ouch! >.<
And that's what I have so fat ..it slipped... ^
Enjoy Deviants! ^^